I think the end is missing. I don't get a sense of how the story ends or how we get out of the painting. You might also want to rethink the timing in your animatic.You might need more than 30 sec. to tell this story at a good pace.
PLease check (read) your very first post. And follow it!
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I think the end is missing. I don't get a sense of how the story ends or how we get out of the painting. You might also want to rethink the timing in your animatic.You might need more than 30 sec. to tell this story at a good pace.
PLease check (read) your very first post. And follow it!
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